Chaotic Artdom: Finished Ver. of Figure Drawing

Friday, November 7, 2008

Zhiyin said...: it is a really cool picture. the figure is much improved, but i think you should have some more details on it.
also, i like your charcoal drawing piece down there.
i think you should finish your unfinish pieces.; November 8, 2008 at 3:42 PM
ccwatson said...: I like the painting of the model, I like the angle and the face. i think your work needs more dimension, its really flat looking. I think your three strongest pieces are the model, the chair, and still life.; November 9, 2008 at 1:24 PM
Laura Bevilacqua said...: 3 favorites: model painting, sketch of chair, pink flowers. the model is my favorite. it just needs some more detail or shadow to make it stand out; November 9, 2008 at 8:52 PM
Jordan said...: 1. I think your strongest peices are the picture of the gun, the pencil drawing of the chair on the table, and the cherry blossoms
2. my favorite is the painting of the gun. Its visually interesting, the colors are candylike and theres alot going on - almost like a collage. I like it alot
3. I think you could work on the peice with the stairs... It feels unfinished to me; November 9, 2008 at 10:46 PM
lschilling said...: This piece is really great, I think that you were pretty ambitious with your foreshortening. It looks pretty good but for some reason I feel like it isn't quite finished...; November 30, 2008 at 12:49 PM